This is my song
This is my brand new song
And it was written just by me
This is my song
And is my first song
That is not a parody
I got the beat and meter
but the rhymes need work
And I got no melody
But tell me what you think
Of my original song
Oh please won’t you please tell me
Good first try,
but it could use a little
counterpoint am I wrong?
Good first try
But maybe some
Counterpoint could help this song
I like it I like it I like
it’s a good approach
I can work with it anyhow.
Tell me what else
Writing songs is hard
See why I haven’t done it before now
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Well, the counterpoint worked
So maybe more
Would make it more interesting
If you wanted to get
Real original
We could even do it in another key
Well that’s real good
This song is shaping up
We’ve made the tune a whole lot tighter
I think honestly
Between you guys and me
We’re on our way to being real song-writers
Hey, Alex, man
We know you love your new song
So this may come as a shock
But it’s not original
There’s one just like this
That’s done by Ookla the Mok
<aw, frakkit!>
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